literature

flutterhands

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You’re lonely—
your arms clasped behind you
in a figure four, flutterhands flit
to tuck the loose strand of hair back
then to pinch the stem of an empty glass
you sip it anyways reapply crimson
smooth dress check phone no texts
type one out, delete it all later.

You know,
I would talk to you
if you didn’t look
so busy.
A poem to break up all the prose I've been punching out. I like this. Maybe it's only the rhythm and speed I made up for it in my head, but I like it. I should do more poems like this. Make up a word for social situations, then write about them. Hm.
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meubanks's avatar
It's visual and flows nicely. It feels like a snapshot of a moment that matters, but that we might have missed if you hadn't brought it to our attention. :)